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Wednesday, 11 April 2018

hard word from my story

Crossing the bridge

Crossing the bridge

On Saturday the 16th of March 1852, there was a farmer and her brown and white cow in the farm. The farmer’s name was called Peaches. They he wait the the market to sell the milk for some money.

First the farmer Peaches got her cow and tried to get the cow to move come on bessie.” She said as she was struggling to pull bessie. Peaches grabbed her coins and she went to William Johnsen the toll keeper. She gave William Johnson 1 coin for her and 1 for her cow.

“Evening Johnsonshe said as she was waiting to cross the bridge.

Filliam Johnson took the money and said “thank you very much,enjoy your day.” William Johnson used his strength to turn the winch so that the farmer could go through the bridge and go to the market. The Farmer and the cow got to the market and the Farmer got the bucket and milked the cow to sell the milk to the villagers.

The farmer looked and looked to see if anyone was coming to get some milk. But then she saw one person in line to see if it tasted nice. So she gave the nice lady some milk and she said WOOPHE!!!, that's the best milk i've ever tasted.” So she bought some milk and took it to her kids and they shared the milk together. After she left she told everyone about the milk and there was a whole line of people waiting to get some milk. After he got to the last person and there was no one else in the line. So she packed up all her stuff and took her Cow home.
Later On they got home and they jumped straight on to their beds and went to sleep.At the end we felt proud that i selled milk.

Recount checklist ✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓
Surface features
Capital letters at the beginning of a sentence
Capital ‘I’
Capital letters for names of places and people
Full stops at the end of a sentence
Speech marks when people are talking
Punctuation - ? ! ; : ‘
Words are written in past tense
Connectives - next, then, afterwards
Interesting and difficult adjectives

Deep features

Introduction has who, what, when, where, why, and how
Conclusion has a reflective statement or says how you felt
Ideas/events in the right order

3 paragraphs

Metaphors and similes
Did not find anything
Different types of sentences - short, long, compound and complex