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Friday 27 July 2018

weather conditions


weather is made of


Names of the atmosphere


choose-your-own-story plan


questions


What did the fat boy name change to?
-Drescbi the girl from the bakery?
Name josefa best friend?timoci
What class did josefa have to go to when it was lunch?
Name 10 people from the book?
Where the story at?
Who is the teacher ?
What is his culture?
What is josefa dads name?
Where does josfa dad work at?

Drescbi josfa house?

Monday 23 July 2018

Pre-reading graphic organizer


HORROR COMES KNOCKING ON YOUR DOOR BY TIMOTE AND ISAIA



One day everything went wrong just a experiment including a nuke it blew up and it affected the humans but the scientist try to make a formula to cure the human but they accidently made a zombie position and gave everyone that had sickness.





That's how we ended up in a old house with trap for zombies.After a few days we have to go loot some houses but we got the jackpot it was a rustrent and it might have food but we found a family.We had to build walls and stairs and platform and we heard knocking on our door but it was one of the zombies so we grabbed our guns i had a scar and mote had a mini gun and we started shooting at them .





After that we took them back to home base one of them were a scientist they ask for materials to make a antidote for the zombies.it took a whole day to make it after we went and tried it and it worded so she made with a little help we cured everyone later on we had to take the family back to tilted towers.

Wednesday 4 July 2018

Walking narrative


Brainstorm of ideas - sonny day and light dirt.

Describing character/setting - they are walking on light brown dirt on a bright sunny day on a wednesday, they are holding some metal sticks

Ideas for the problem - one of them might trip on a rock that is deep into the ground and broke their leg.

Ideas for the solution - they used aid kit

Start here:
On a sony day me and my mate paula went for a hike first we had to pack our stuff like first aid kit,bange, drink bottle,axe and our bag. When we were about to go we were so excited because this is the first time we did this.

So then they went out and started the walk then they started to run then they stopped for a drink then ran again. Then paula askilenly tripped on a rock that was deep into the ground and broke his leg.

When paula was tripped on the rock and broke his leg i went into my bag and grabbed my aid kit and put the bandages around it. Then I called the ambulance and the ambulance and took him to the hospital.

Week 9 and 10


Monday 2 July 2018

WALT how to use dialogue in our writing



Focuses for writing this week
Explanation in my own words.
How to use speech marks
In the front and the end
How to put in other punctuation
Before the speech marks
When to start a new line or when to keep writing
When the person says something back and if you are still talking
Different words for ‘said’
Asked, replied, responded, yelled, screamed, shouted, mumbled, said, muttered, gasped, panting, chuckled, thought, told, uttered, continued, whispered
Adding adverbs
Responded politely, asked politely, screamed angrily,


EXAMPLES
“Who can I pick on?” asked Miss Ashley.
“Me” replied Timote.


“How was your day?” asked Hope.
“Great, thank you” replied Miss Ashley.


“How was your weekend” asked Dwyane.
“It was good” responded Havea.


If more than one person is talking, you put the reply underneath.
Mary was a beautiful girl who was wearing her long black hair in two plaits. She asked her mum, “can I go to the pools today?”.
“Why do you want to go” mum replied.
“It’s hot and I want to cool off”.
“Fine then”


If it’s only one person, you keep going.
Little red riding hood walked along the dirt path and thought to herself “I’m getting hungry”. She had walked a looooonng way but the thought of warm apple pie when she got to grandma’s house kept her going.


MY GROUP’S EXAMPLE.
“Want to go park?”asked Timote
“Yes” Replied Paula.
“Do you want go to park”asked Timote
“yes” replied isaia.


“Do you have money”Asked Paula
“Why”Asked Timote
“To get some shoes”Said Paula
“Here take my money”Said Isaia





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