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Friday 29 June 2018

This old man


I learnt to play This Old Man on piano

The water fall


There was man named Axel Belvins  he wanted to make his dream come true by jumping of the tallest waterfall.

Me and my friends took a minivan there.We had to make a pot stop to food and gas when we got there we had to do a barbarcar to cook.Some of us went into the sea and had a swim.

After the long swim they went to hunt some animals to have something to eat for their lunch. Also they went and got some water for the lunch.Later on me and john went looking for the water when we found it we told the rest of the crew to first we munch than we go.After we munched we went to the waterfall and jumped off after that we went home

Finding descriptive language examples


Finding descriptive language examples


WALT write detailed description of setting and character


introductions



Once upon a time
One sunny day
One beautiful bright sunny day
One marvelous day
One horrible rainy day
In a faraway land
In the deepest ocean
In the darkest prison
Far far away
In a dark forest
In a vast desert
In a creepy dungeon
In the scary woods
In a haunted house
In a movie set
In a creepy maze
In a wonderful school
In a small town


There was
A beautiful girl
An old man
Royal family
A wise girl
A handsome man
A traveller
A scary monster
A butler
Guards
Handsome prince
beautiful queen
Creepy clown
Young princess
Royal king
Famous celebrity
A gangster bodyguard
A music producer
A sad servant
A sneaky thief
Who was Lost
Enormously rich
Poor
Diva
Who lived in a cottage
Who had 6 sons and 6 daughters
Had a glass eyeball
Had a ginormous family
Lived in las vegas
Who had robotic legs
Who was a marvellous actor
Who only ever had onions
Who was a robber
Who lived on the streets
Part time DJ part time spy
Who had only leg
Who was a murderer
Who was a huge nerd
Who had one fat eye.

On a scary day in a small quiet town where there was only one sneaky and quiet family they can only speak in sign language.They use light if they were in trouble they would switch the light red so family can come because they are in trouble.

ON  horrible rainy day we had to clean our new house i always think that this house was haunted so i had to clean the attic when i was cleaning I found a box I saw a photo of a old lady.I had a gifted i could see ghost.

peters lost sister


Once upon a time a boy named Peter went to the market to buy bread and fish. He got money from his guardian. When he went through the market he saw a fortune teller. He wanted to go there but his guardian told him to buy bread and fish but he followed his passion and went to the fortune teller.



Peter thought the fortune teller was a little bit dodgy because it was only $1 per person. He went in with fear and knew he was getting scammed. He went to him and put the dollar in with a little shake. The teller said “Your sister is still alive just try and believe me”.
Peter knew it was a huge mistake he made by going in the fortune teller, Because he knew that the sister died from cancer. He went home to his guardian and then he just did not lie to the guardian.


He followed his heart and he didn't lie to the guardian. He  came empty handed to his guardian and the guardian said “Follow your passion and it will lead the way”. THE END


narrative plan

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Brainstorm of ideas:
  • Car crash, people inside the car, fire fighters, not looking, fire-fighters, man was driving then suddenly he crashed into a pole, speeding, different kinds of services - police and ambulance. Flipped,
  • See - people standing around, glass on the ground, windshield or windscreen,  stop traffic, upside down, airbags, fire extinguishers,
  • smell/hear - gasoline or petrol or oil, smoke, sirens, people talking

PEOPLE/SETTING
PROBLEM
SOLUTION
Drunk driver, John Cena, 60 year old man,
Car crash
A witness calls the ambulance, police and fire service
No glasses so couldn’t see
injuries - broken arm, broken ribs, brain damage, cuts
Fire fighters use jaws of life to get the person out and save them. They cut the car in half.
On the phone
Petrol leak, and the engine was gonna blow up, so the whole car was gonna blow up.
Fire extinguisher, put saw dust on the petrol, get the people out first before it explodes.
Distracting - picking something up, or changing the radio station.



Title:
My first day of work
Intro
2 sentences
On my first day of work I had a emergency already it was a car that flip over .
Orientation 5-10 sentences
WHEN
WHO
WHAT
WHERE
WHY
HOW
CHARACTERS
When we arrived we had to find out who was in it it was a lady name isaia and a man named lopi they just came from a party.There were drunk lopi said to isaia to drive but she falled asleep in the middle of a highway but the car was still driving then they hit a motorcycle then flipped.After a while me and my fire crew came first we identify the civilians and what happen so we talked to them they told us that there were drunk thankful that they were telling the truth.
Problem
5-10 sentences
Our problem was both our civilians were injured they both break their arms because they had jumed lopi arm between the door and the the man that was riding the motorcycle he jumed he arm under the car and the police had to find out who is going to pay.
Solution
Finally our solution was here it was the ambulance came.
Conclusion
Less than 5 sentences
I feel happy because me helping them.

postcards in space


South by the Southern Cross

Thursday 28 June 2018

Twinkle Twinkle star colours

Put a ring around it


introductions



Once upon a time
One sunny day
One beautiful bright sunny day
One marvelous day
One horrible rainy day
In a faraway land
In the deepest ocean
In the darkest prison
Far far away
In a dark forest
In a vast desert
In a creepy dungeon
In the scary woods
In a haunted house
In a movie set
In a creepy maze
In a wonderful school
In a small town


There was
A beautiful girl
An old man
Royal family
A wise girl
A handsome man
A traveller
A scary monster
A butler
Guards
Handsome prince
beautiful queen
Creepy clown
Young princess
Royal king
Famous celebrity
A gangster bodyguard
A music producer
A sad servant
A sneaky thief
Who was Lost
Enormously rich
Poor
Diva
Who lived in a cottage
Who had 6 sons and 6 daughters
Had a glass eyeball
Had a ginormous family
Lived in las vegas
Who had robotic legs
Who was a marvellous actor
Who only ever had onions
Who was a robber
Who lived on the streets
Part time DJ part time spy
Who had only leg
Who was a murderer
Who was a huge nerd
Who had one fat eye.

On a scary day in a small quiet town where there was only one sneaky and quiet family they can only speak in sign language.They use light if they were in trouble they would switch the light red so family can come because they are in trouble.

ON  horrible rainy day we had to clean our new house i always think that this house was haunted so i had to clean the attic when i was cleaning I found a box I saw a photo of a old lady.I had a gifted i could see ghost.

No escape


Friday 22 June 2018

Mars


Tuesday 19 June 2018

Goldilocks zone

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giordano bruno and Teng Mu

bruno
What did they believe?he believed that the Earth had a soul.
How did they observe the universe? With telescopes and with rocket ships.
What tools did they use?a telescope
Why didn’t the church agree with  them? The church didn’t agree because they didn’t believe in other earths and heavens.
What happened to them? He got burned alive



Teng
What tools did they use? Unknown m n

What happened to Teng? He died in 1306 in the reign of Yuian.

Friday 15 June 2018

solar system anticipation guide - Google Drawings


Mars

Oxygen
We can't stay there because the air is bad but we can take oxygen tanks to breathe there.

The water
We can't not take any because it is heavy but we can change it we can get a rocket that is contour by the people nasa so no one has to go space we can control it by the ground like you have a toy rocket.

Food challenge:
On mars you will need a lot of food because you need food so you dont starve to deaf. If you have no food on mars you will survive 2 weeks.

Shelter challenge: you need shelter to protect yourself from the sun, and to keep you warm and you need a greenhouse to grow plants and other stuff.

chin link



Fortnite


ugly girl


My charter has ginger hair that plaited and the wind is blowing it from her head and has carrot orange rubber band from her hair.She has a fringe and it hanging from her four head.She  smile a lot with bright white teeth she has a grass green and gold yellow fur and it a monkey on her shoulder.She is wearing a honey yellow and vanilla white t - Shirt.She has bright red cheeks and has peach red lips and has emerald  green eye.

Describing a picture



Tuesday 12 June 2018

Friday 8 June 2018

bouncy castle


On the 7th of june we went to the bouncy castle and had fun and i would like to thanks milan he won the contest by put your name and they pick you than you win a prize he won it than give it to the school.When we went there the lady had to tell us the rules after that we went on it all of us raced to bet the other one.It was fun trying and awesome

phases of the moon activity


phases of the moon activity


Friday 1 June 2018