camping

On Tuesday 11th September some of the student in Room 7 went Kapa Haka, when they went Kapa Haka.

Miss Ashley told us “to get our netbooks”
Room 7 replied “some of the netbooks are flat”
Miss Ashley “told us who cares you can just work with a buddy”. When we were walking down stairs we realize that were gonna achieving a big goal of life.
First Timote and Isaia and Paula helped Miss Ashley to get the stuff from the car, when Timote and Isaia and Paula are back we started walking to the top court near the tree. When we got there we were planning after the planning we knowed how to do it after 1 hour we finley did it after that we played a game of invisible touch and had free time on our netbook.

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Capital letters at the beginning of a sentence	✓	✓
Capital ‘I’	✓	✓
Capital letters for names of places and people	✓	✓	✓
Full stops at the end of a sentence	✓	✓
Speech marks when people are talking	✓	✓
Punctuation - ? ! ; : ‘	✓	✓
Words are written in past tense	✓	✓
Connectives - next, then, afterwards	✓	✓
Interesting and difficult adjectives	✓	✓	✓
Deep features
Introduction has who, what, when, where, why, and how	✓	✓
Conclusion has a reflective statement or says how you felt	✓	✓	✓
Ideas/events in the right order	✓	✓
3 paragraphs	✓	✓
Metaphors and similes	✓	✓
Different types of sentences - short, long, compound and complex	✓	✓