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Friday 29 June 2018

narrative plan

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Brainstorm of ideas:
  • Car crash, people inside the car, fire fighters, not looking, fire-fighters, man was driving then suddenly he crashed into a pole, speeding, different kinds of services - police and ambulance. Flipped,
  • See - people standing around, glass on the ground, windshield or windscreen,  stop traffic, upside down, airbags, fire extinguishers,
  • smell/hear - gasoline or petrol or oil, smoke, sirens, people talking

PEOPLE/SETTING
PROBLEM
SOLUTION
Drunk driver, John Cena, 60 year old man,
Car crash
A witness calls the ambulance, police and fire service
No glasses so couldn’t see
injuries - broken arm, broken ribs, brain damage, cuts
Fire fighters use jaws of life to get the person out and save them. They cut the car in half.
On the phone
Petrol leak, and the engine was gonna blow up, so the whole car was gonna blow up.
Fire extinguisher, put saw dust on the petrol, get the people out first before it explodes.
Distracting - picking something up, or changing the radio station.



Title:
My first day of work
Intro
2 sentences
On my first day of work I had a emergency already it was a car that flip over .
Orientation 5-10 sentences
WHEN
WHO
WHAT
WHERE
WHY
HOW
CHARACTERS
When we arrived we had to find out who was in it it was a lady name isaia and a man named lopi they just came from a party.There were drunk lopi said to isaia to drive but she falled asleep in the middle of a highway but the car was still driving then they hit a motorcycle then flipped.After a while me and my fire crew came first we identify the civilians and what happen so we talked to them they told us that there were drunk thankful that they were telling the truth.
Problem
5-10 sentences
Our problem was both our civilians were injured they both break their arms because they had jumed lopi arm between the door and the the man that was riding the motorcycle he jumed he arm under the car and the police had to find out who is going to pay.
Solution
Finally our solution was here it was the ambulance came.
Conclusion
Less than 5 sentences
I feel happy because me helping them.

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