Tuesday, 29 November 2016

eotc recount

WALT: use time words in a recount
SC: I can highlight 5 time words I have used in my recount

Instructions: You must write a recount about what you did last week for EOTC week.
A recount is a story about something that has already happened - something in the past.
In recounts, we use words like
  • First
  • Next
  • Then
  • Afterwards
  • Before
  • Later on
  • And days of the week - Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday, Friday

Your task is to write a recount about your week. You can add pictures if you want to.
Before posting on your blog, highlight any time words you have used. You MUST use at least 5 of these.

For your blog:
Labels - tps, year4, writing
Title: WALT use time words in a recount

Start writing here:
On monday tamaki primary students went to bowling and laser tag room 6,7,8 went to was fun becuse we were in teams my faitoure part was that we so our score.Then in laser tag it was very dark we had to were this glow thing and we had guns it could chage in to a blther or a machin gun.

The next day we went to mini golfit was fun becuse we had to go to other places that can you shot faiture part was that we could buy stuff from the shop at the mini golf places i buyed a ice cram it was for 2 $.then i went with sosaia we had so mach fun.

The next day we had slap and slide we had to  come with cloth but we had to home with our school cloth it was fun because we slided on the slide it was slaper and long there were other places in our school to play in . we put water on the people was watching us they were wet some of the were wet when they went faitoure part was slideing becuse i went so faw.Then i went to get water.

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